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Algeny


PROLOGUE




The car moved so quickly and smoothly across the surface road that it made no sound.  Modern cars made were so efficient that their engines barely even whispered as they ran.  

The buildings of the city were tall and perfectly blank.  They stood unadorned, blending in seemlessly with steely grey skies.
    
The man sitting in the passenger seat turned his head to the adolescent girl in the back.  She had her eyes fixed on her feet, sitting in uncomfortable silence.
    
"Do you know why we do what we do, Marion?" he asked her very plainly.
    
With tears in welling up in her electric green eyes, she shook her head.  She avoided his own, because they were so indifferent.
    
"We do what we do, because it makes this," he said, gesturing outward toward the cityscape, "perfectly harmonious.  There isn't a dust particle out of place.  Everything in Vadium is as perfect as it can be; and that's all there is of it."
    
The car sped along through the city's main street.  It passed through block after block—each filled with identical buildings, which served nearly identical purposes and housed nearly identical people.
    
"Nature's method," the passenger began, "is to kill off that which does not work to the benefit of the species as a whole."
    
She remained morosely silent, shifting her gaze to upholstery of the back seat.  There wasn't a stain to be found in the grey carpet.
    
"We do what we do, because we believe the human mind was developed to speed nature's process.  After over two milleniums, we understood.  Do not help the helpless live. . ." he trailed off.  "Help nature kill them."
    
She looked up at his face coldly, trying to stifle her emotions as he had; her tears had gone.
    
"It's a pity your father had to die; I always loved him."
    
She breathed hard, hate-filled breaths, wanting so badly to strangle the breath from his lungs.
    
"We do what we do, because without a function, life is waste.  Without a function, life is your garbage.  Without a function," he said, looking in her wet eyes, "life is only an unfortunate mess, and I am the janitor."

He sat back in his seat, and pulled out his gun, inspecting it's long barrel.  From his front pocket, he pulled out a silver cloth and wiped down the weapon.

"I think in time, you'll come to understand what I do and why I do it, Marion."

Defenseless to him, she swallowed back her pain and her indelible hatred.  She levelled out her head and answered, "then let's hope, Uncle, that until then, I serve a desired purpose."

The passenger smiled, and put his gun away.
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This is a short story that I wrote some time ago, and now as I look back on it, I think it relates very well to the Algeny story, so I'm making it the prologue.

Let me know what you think.

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wow, great story. Makes you want to know more about Marion and how she got into that situation, and more about the uncle too. Makes you wonder exactly what is in his mind to make him think killing is doing good. Tho the girl didn't say much, you painted a pretty good picture that her uncle was very much in control of her, and you could tell she was very unhappy. Enjoyed reading it, thanks.
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Beautifully written story, I stayed interested and was curious to know how it was going to end, I even wished there was more. As opposed to wondering what was in the uncle's mind, I thought oppositely and wondered what was in the girls mind? How was she able to level herself out of such an intense, emotional situation and come up with a good response. Instead of the "No, put it away.." or something stupid like that
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Well, I'm very glad you liked it. Sorry that it took so long to respond to this. But I truly appreciate your time :D

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I'm very excited that you liked this =). Sorry that this took so long to get back to you.

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took so long i forgot who you were ;]
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i agree, it works perfectly as the prologue! gives the story a more dangerous, urgent layer to start with. just a little typo --> you forgot the last quotation mark at the end
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Thanks for the advice. Glad you liked it, Stelle! :)

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