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The young doctor sat with a sigh, rubbing his temples with his fingertips. Moving very slowly, he pulled out and spoke very softly, but gravely, into a tape recorder.
Audio log of Dr. Ian Kovane, 25 January 2041. He sighed briefly before continuing.
Vanity has been an integral part of the human psyche, the human spirit, and all human society since the beginning of time. It has always existed; it will always exist.
A man trudged quickly through a seemingly endless field of snow. His child rested, swaddled in tattered, grey blankets, in his arms. He had begun to lull her to sleep with a gentle lullaby as they walked.
Despite the layers of clothes and blankets between them, the little girl felt her fathers heartbeat like a war drum.
Fear had set in, and the wolves were upon them.
In the later twentieth century and on into the twenty-first, vanity took the form of plastic surgery. Exercise routines and healthy diet fell off the face of the earththey never stood a chance. He laughed to himself darkly before continuing.
Everyone was looking for a quick fixan access road to perfection.
As the man continued, he heard a car engine. It was far behind him, but it was shortening the gap with each breath he took.
Closer now.
Closer still.
Eventually vanity evolved. Soon, plastic surgeries werent enough, and people started dabbling in eugenics. And this science, which started out as a means for curing genetic disease, became a vain attempt to be the prettiest, strongest, fastest, smartest we could be.
Soon, eugenics became the tool in our misguided pursuit to become perfect.
The man didnt stop walking until he heard the car stop right behind him. Their was no sound as the engine stoppedall he could hear was his breaths as his heart began to thud up against the walls of his chest.
As he heard the doors open and shut, his drumming heart stopped. Not knowing what to do, he clutched his child closer into his chest.
A voice from behind the man rang out very loudly and militantly. Are you Dr. Walter Polk?
He paused for only a moment before speaking. Yes.
Dr. Polk, are you aware that you are in direct violation of federal ordinance 52-9G? the voice asked. Its owner audibly loaded a rifle behind him. A second body followed suit. They were officers of the lawchlorinators, as theyd come to be known.
Yes.
And you are aware that that law states that within five days of the conviction of your crime, you were to show up at Vadium Plaza for termination?
Trying to stay emotionless, the doctor said, Yes.
And you are clearly aware that you failed to do so and that my orders are to shoot you on sight?
Yes.
The two officers encircled Walter, keeping their guns pointed at his chest. It was the shorter of the two that first noticed the blankets swaddled in his arms.
But there was a problem, the doctor began after a long pause.
Sir, what are you carrying? one of the men demanded, snarling.
Walter did not move or say anything. His fear had devoured his ability to answer.
Sir, if you do not answer me, I will be forced to shoot. What are you carrying?
Walter remained silent.
I repeat, if you do not answer me, I will be forced to shoot, the officer continued. Dr. Kovane? Do you understand me?
Now, he didnt even seem to breathe.
The officer reared back, ready to deliver.
The doctor breathed deeply and continued. because in the pursuit for perfection,
Without a moments more hesitation, the officer fired at the bundle in Walters arms, and the childs blood splattered scarlet like paint over an infinitely white and snowy canvas.
we are the criminals.
Anguish mowed Walter down, and he was crippled in his loss. Too agonized to scream, he fell to his knees in silence, burying his head in the tattered blankets and pulling his childs small body to him as tightly as possible.
They used only one bullet to end his suffering and drove away, having nothing at all to say about it.
Dr. Kovane slammed his hand on his desk, knocking down the tape recorder. Tears welled in his eyes, and as he blinked, only a few escaped down his cheeks.
He picked up the tape recorder and spoke far more softly than before.
Walter Polk, a colleague and friend of over thirty years, and his daughter were shot yesterday afternoon. They were two of the last five genetically unaltered people still alive. Now, there are only threemy wife, my daughter, and myself.
And with Walter fired and dead, I am, for the first time, afraid my family may not have much time left.
How long will they really let me live?
How long will I be an asset to this society?
And when I stop being useful, will they remember that I used to be? Or will I, like so many others be slaughtered?
He ran his fingers through his hair. So many questions with absolutely no answers. He wished so badly he could stop thinking and that he could stop being afraid.
Thats all for tonight, he said with a long sigh. End audio log.
He pressed the stop button and got out of his chair. Wrapping his fingers around the chain, he pulled it to turn off the light. He remained sitting in the darkness. He tried to let himself decompress.
After a few moments, he stood and walked out of his den and out into the dark hallway. Tired, he continued along so engrossed in his thoughts that he almost didnt hear his daughter call out to him.
Daddy?
He stopped and looked into her room.
What is it, sweetie? he asked, walking in. He sat at by her at the head of her bed and let her rest her head in his lap.
A boy at school told me I was different, she said. He said you and mommy were different, too.
Running a finger through her hair, he said, Well, of course. Were all different.
Yeah, but he said it was a bad thing. He said we were freaks, she said sadly. Are we freaks, daddy?
Of course not.
Then why did he say that?
He said it, because Ians words trailed off. He took a deep breath. Do you know what daddy does when he goes to work?
You help people. You make them better.
Thats right, he replied. Sometimes, people get sick when theyre bornsometimes mommies and daddies make their kids sick.
How?
Well, you know how we say you have mommys eyes, because theyre blue like hers?
His daughter nodded up at him.
Well, sometimes kids get their parents sicknesses, and its my job to change the way their made so they dont have to be sick, he explained. But some people. All people, he kept to himself. Some people decide they want to make their kids different than they were already. But you, me, and mommy, were all the same as we always were.
Why? Why are we the same? Why am I the same?
Because when you were born, he said, pulling her up into his chest. Your mommy and I decided you were too perfect to change.
She smiled, yawning sleepily, and he smiled at her. He laid her down, tucked her in, and kissed her forehead.
You get to sleep, okay? he said.
She nodded, slowly drifting off toward sleep, and he walked from the room slowlyhis mind swimming, drowning in thought.
He made his way back into the hallway and walked slowly toward his room. His wife lied asleep in their bed; he smiled at her figure as it waxed and waned with each breath she took.
He stepped into the bathroom and flicked on the fluorescent light. In the mirror, he saw very tired eyes; on the mirror, he saw a few newspaper articles, which had been hanging there for nine years.
Government Declares All Humans Are Illegal, New federal ordinance says all genetically non-altered citizens are subject to termination, Riots eminent, experts say, Downtown in flames, Five left, A Perfect World.
Emotion swallowed him, and Ian crumpled the articles, angrily throwing them to the bathroom floor. He sank, crouching and crying out all the tearsfor Walter and his daughter, for his family, for himself, for the freedom theyd taken for granted.
A perfect world, he thought, scathingly repeating the newspaper articles. He reached out and picked up one of the crumpled articles. He had underlined nearly half of it.
On the front there were two picturesthe first was of Vadium city before the federal ordinance and the second was the city after. The first was coated in smog and writhed with inefficiency. And the second, thanks to the superior genetics of our race was the height of perfection.
Ian began to shake, and he dropped the article. He wished so badly that this could all be some terrible nightmarebut in thirty-two years, hed never woken up.
He didnt bother to muffle his sobs as he sank lower to the floor, because he wasnt afraid of waking his family. It didnt matter anymoretheir time was running dangerously low, and he knew it.
Fear had set in, and he believed that, soon, the wolves would be upon them.














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